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the text doesn't look right, it just look like its been placed in there, it doesn't look like its sitting on the ground or anything, the pool is at the wrong angle and also when do you see a little pool with waves like that? i can see what you was going for but there is room for alot of improvement.
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if I were yo I would get ideas from a YouTube channel called gfx for cancer
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Colour defiantly needs some work,
The space background looks out of place because of the colour.
Lake needs better positioning, looks like its kind of floating,
Also the tree's look 2D and fake, i'd try sort them out.
Other than that, looks ok, could have some more added, and as i say, better colouring,
Also this is a very popular manipulation type, many people do these, especially for their first ever manipulation, stand out from the crowd, make yours different from the others, thats how you going to get noticed and better, originality is key.
But as i say, for your first one, not too bad i guess, i would take out the 3D Text though, spoils the feel of the piece, and make it fit the whole screen instead of having a black background, really kills the feel of the piece, but good job for your first.
Keep at it and improve!
-GRAPHlCS
The space background looks out of place because of the colour.
Lake needs better positioning, looks like its kind of floating,
Also the tree's look 2D and fake, i'd try sort them out.
Other than that, looks ok, could have some more added, and as i say, better colouring,
Also this is a very popular manipulation type, many people do these, especially for their first ever manipulation, stand out from the crowd, make yours different from the others, thats how you going to get noticed and better, originality is key.
But as i say, for your first one, not too bad i guess, i would take out the 3D Text though, spoils the feel of the piece, and make it fit the whole screen instead of having a black background, really kills the feel of the piece, but good job for your first.
Keep at it and improve!
-GRAPHlCS
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