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Lyrics for my first release...(Feedback?)
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I will be going off this beat
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Lyrics:
Yeah Im off the meter, Ill be bangin through your speakers
I was made in a science lab, in a simple little beaker
Their goal was to make a mad, mean, rappin machine
Something like Logic and Meekins, but a little in between
Yeah you know Im only 16, Ill be rapping as a teen
The way Im winning, yeah Im sorta like Charlie Sheen

I have foreseen my future, and it looks unbelievable
I definitely feel that it may be achievable
The way Im spittin, its quite unstable
Once I become big I will be untouchable
Maybe one day I might even sign to a label
F UC K that S HI T, they only want my money
And I aint no dummy
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Thats sounds dope bro
if you record that
send a link my way
id be so down to bump that yo
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Can I use it on a video of mine?
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MoDOT wrote Can I use it on a video of mine?

It just lyrics bro
Not the full song
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Don't worry, it should be up in a week
I created that verse in an hour, and I just have one more to go

Here's my YouTube
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Mind if I give some friendly criticism? That's tight you can rhyme. But you shouldn't talk about yourself in every line you know. Youd reach a wider fan base if you didn't and might even be noticed. And I'd find something that makes you unique and different from everybody else.
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