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#11. Posted:
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Not bad.....

Matty will come in on this soon and offer you some killer feedback.

Watch your capitalization of the "I" also, it looks heavy on the left side of the design.
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Inkz wrote Not bad.....

Matty will come in on this soon and offer you some killer feedback.

Watch your capitalization of the "I" also, it looks heavy on the left side of the design.


I suppose I will sir....

I am only going to mention things that should be changed, I will not mention the good parts as well you can decided them after my feedback.

So..I will start at top working left to right and tell you what I think.
- So for starters the name, why is it separated from the logo, it looks messy and is not user friendly.
- For the navigation use text or text and small images, there are very few users that look out for image only.
- Massive green button and over-sized text, yeah make that a lot smaller and place it toward the bottom of the header, same side.
- Name faded into background, get rid of it.
- Take the portfolio images and set them out a little more, fill the space.
- main content area should either be centered with a margin either side of about 1/10 of the canvas size.
- OR user all the space and say you have just designed content area, either way should be centered or filled from side to side.
- Punctuation, spelling and grammar go a long way in web design, even though I am hardly one to talk sometimes... the 'i' is 'I'..
- The font for 'My name is...(blah, blah)" please find a cleaner font that fits with the other ones used.
- Latest work section try to give the images a bit of depth of the site so they look a little more 'poped' out at you. Again should be centered or otherwise fixed.
- Connection logos, I feel are a little to big, make them a little smaller and work them into the footer instead maybe or just a little smaller.
- Footer content again centered or otherwise faxed as suggested above.
- Big blue button?!? Doesn't fit the theme at all, maybe just some text or a smaller button in orange or such a colour.


That is my base feedback, probably got a lot more out of it but I would rather you fixed the framework first.

QWERTY.
Matt.
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MattMiller wrote
Inkz wrote Not bad.....

Matty will come in on this soon and offer you some killer feedback.

Watch your capitalization of the "I" also, it looks heavy on the left side of the design.


I suppose I will sir....

I am only going to mention things that should be changed, I will not mention the good parts as well you can decided them after my feedback.

So..I will start at top working left to right and tell you what I think.
- So for starters the name, why is it separated from the logo, it looks messy and is not user friendly.
- For the navigation use text or text and small images, there are very few users that look out for image only.
- Massive green button and over-sized text, yeah make that a lot smaller and place it toward the bottom of the header, same side.
- Name faded into background, get rid of it.
- Take the portfolio images and set them out a little more, fill the space.
- main content area should either be centered with a margin either side of about 1/10 of the canvas size.
- OR user all the space and say you have just designed content area, either way should be centered or filled from side to side.
- Punctuation, spelling and grammar go a long way in web design, even though I am hardly one to talk sometimes... the 'i' is 'I'..
- The font for 'My name is...(blah, blah)" please find a cleaner font that fits with the other ones used.
- Latest work section try to give the images a bit of depth of the site so they look a little more 'poped' out at you. Again should be centered or otherwise fixed.
- Connection logos, I feel are a little to big, make them a little smaller and work them into the footer instead maybe or just a little smaller.
- Footer content again centered or otherwise faxed as suggested above.
- Big blue button?!? Doesn't fit the theme at all, maybe just some text or a smaller button in orange or such a colour.


That is my base feedback, probably got a lot more out of it but I would rather you fixed the framework first.

QWERTY.
Matt.


So you like it then Matty lol
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It looks clean and very simple, nice.

8/10

Hogni
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Image has been updated. Check it out.
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I'd give it a solid 8/10.

Very clean and nice work and i think the connections thing at the bottom is cool.
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Zeff wrote I'd give it a solid 8/10.

Very clean and nice work and i think the connections thing at the bottom is cool.


Thank you, appreciate it alot
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