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Brilliant! the flow is great, the colours match and are easy on the eyes (almost creating a vintage atmosphere; I presume that's what you're going for). Only criticism is the 3 social networking buttons, they are too big in comparison to the search bar. keep up the great designs.
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Any brief on the project?
What it is? What it serves?
I'm guessing it's about WW1, or WW2.
Anyway, all-in-all it's not that great.
NOTE: If you don't think you can handle criticism, don't open the spoiler.
That's all I have to say about it for now.
Hopefully you get something out of it.
For what it matters,
-Chi
What it is? What it serves?
I'm guessing it's about WW1, or WW2.
Anyway, all-in-all it's not that great.
NOTE: If you don't think you can handle criticism, don't open the spoiler.
It doesn't scream out WW1 when I look at it.
The style, the font choice, along with the color choice just looks like something
that would be expected on a gaming website.
It's more modern, and has a more "childish" look to it,
when it probably deserves a more serious type look to it.
Moving on, there is a lot of blank space.
However, I realize that it's a work in progress.
-Learn how to use Lorem Ipsum, it will take away that empty space
from the bottom portion of the screen, filling it in with text.
-Work on your navigation, it's very empty also,
it has nothing more than three words.
-As for whatever you have going on here:
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I can understand seeing the search bar there (hardly),
but keep the social jazz out of there, it belongs at
the bottom if anything.
And the last thing is, work on centering things a tad' better.
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The style, the font choice, along with the color choice just looks like something
that would be expected on a gaming website.
It's more modern, and has a more "childish" look to it,
when it probably deserves a more serious type look to it.
Moving on, there is a lot of blank space.
However, I realize that it's a work in progress.
-Learn how to use Lorem Ipsum, it will take away that empty space
from the bottom portion of the screen, filling it in with text.
-Work on your navigation, it's very empty also,
it has nothing more than three words.
-As for whatever you have going on here:
[ Register or Signin to view external links. ]
I can understand seeing the search bar there (hardly),
but keep the social jazz out of there, it belongs at
the bottom if anything.
And the last thing is, work on centering things a tad' better.
- [ Register or Signin to view external links. ]
- [ Register or Signin to view external links. ]
- [ Register or Signin to view external links. ]
That's all I have to say about it for now.
Hopefully you get something out of it.
For what it matters,
-Chi
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