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My 2nd OCE. How can I improve?
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So I have been editing for about 2 days now and I still need to improve.
So tell me, what would you improve on this?
Besides the 2 sec delay when the clip starts.
So tell me, what would you improve on this?
Besides the 2 sec delay when the clip starts.
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There was hardly any effects while the shot was in action.
Just needs more effects, don't be so simple be different add something so we know,
Your just not another editor, and disliked the song choice.
Just needs more effects, don't be so simple be different add something so we know,
Your just not another editor, and disliked the song choice.
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I thought the lightning was too dark, in my opinion. Also just add some effects to it, and it should be fine.
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Well as you said yourself, there was a delay in the beginning, fix that, and it'll look a lot better.
When you fire the gun, add gun sound to it and sync it with the music, didn't really like the song choice, could be something with more beats, so it will be easier to sync. When you add gun sound, download a gun sounds, don't use the sound in the original clip, you'd get a lot of other sounds you don't want to have.
The cinematic was good, but there was perfect spots to add motion tracked 3D text! Try add that as well!
Good luck :bigups:
When you fire the gun, add gun sound to it and sync it with the music, didn't really like the song choice, could be something with more beats, so it will be easier to sync. When you add gun sound, download a gun sounds, don't use the sound in the original clip, you'd get a lot of other sounds you don't want to have.
The cinematic was good, but there was perfect spots to add motion tracked 3D text! Try add that as well!
Good luck :bigups:
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