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#11. Posted:
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I like this piece. I'm not to fond of the Black and White effect though.
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Pen-Tool wrote
Nag wrote
This is amazing Graphics. Nice Clean Style. I Actually Like It <3

10/10


Are you daft? Or just blind?
That is not clean at all. That is the opposite of clean.
Not only is the logo presented incorrectly, as usual around here, it's very low quality.
Plus nothing is a 10/10. There is always room for improvement. Especially on this.

Go find any recent post by Inkz, that is how a logo should be presented.
If you're showing off a logo, it should be a clean, sharp 2d logo.

By making it 3d and adding all these effects you're not showing the logo. Your showing your design which in this case is an avatar. With a VERY overused style, at that.

Now on to your AVATAR design,
It's too low quality. Try re rendering it a bit bigger if you needed to rescale it, or fix your settings if that's not that case.
The "Flare" Text at the bottom is too close to the logo. Move it down a bit. I'd also suggest changing the font. It doesn't go with it.
There's also too much contrast, it doesn't look good.

A clean, artistic, original 2D style will always look better than this overused 3D junk.


Very true..

I would like to see the logo before you import the paths to C4D...Oh, it's a lobster "M" lol
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Nag wrote
This is amazing Graphics. Nice Clean Style. I Actually Like It <3

10/10


If this is clean i wonder what your room looks like : )
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4/10, I literally don't even know what it says or if it even says anything.

Very dark, Too many cracks and ripples, Impossible to decipher (For me), and lastly it looks like all the other youtube art that the other 500,000 people make.

Re-amp your style and and improve upon your work, Not all work has to be 3D i personally enjoy 2D better.

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This again? really.

THIS IS MY OPINION/QUOTE so don't go crazy.

'In order to present yourself as a good graphic designer you have to be like no other'

I made a quote
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Inkz wrote
Pen-Tool wrote
Nag wrote
This is amazing Graphics. Nice Clean Style. I Actually Like It <3

10/10


Are you daft? Or just blind?
That is not clean at all. That is the opposite of clean.
Not only is the logo presented incorrectly, as usual around here, it's very low quality.
Plus nothing is a 10/10. There is always room for improvement. Especially on this.

Go find any recent post by Inkz, that is how a logo should be presented.
If you're showing off a logo, it should be a clean, sharp 2d logo.

By making it 3d and adding all these effects you're not showing the logo. Your showing your design which in this case is an avatar. With a VERY overused style, at that.

Now on to your AVATAR design,
It's too low quality. Try re rendering it a bit bigger if you needed to rescale it, or fix your settings if that's not that case.
The "Flare" Text at the bottom is too close to the logo. Move it down a bit. I'd also suggest changing the font. It doesn't go with it.
There's also too much contrast, it doesn't look good.

A clean, artistic, original 2D style will always look better than this overused 3D junk.


Very true..

I would like to see the logo before you import the paths to C4D...Oh, it's a lobster "M" lol


Actually The Font Is Not Lobster, Its Harbell. I Love 2D Designs And I'm Not A Fan Of Cinema 4D, The Guy Asked For Something Of What I Call 'Trickshot Graphics' (Its Were Its 'Overdone' And Almost Unreadable
#17. Posted:
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It looks ok, But very low quality. I personally don't like the font you used but I'll give it a 6/10.
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