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first try on C4D i need feedback
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Please leave feedback as i want to get better
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pretty smart bro nice work
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Thanks for the comments but are there any pointers that I need?
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To be fair C4D text looks bad but if you like it that's all that matters, I think you need a good light box and some textures also maybe watch to tutorial on how to make intros if you like C4D
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I've got Photoshop as well but I just wanted to do something quick
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Krumpify wrote I've got Photoshop as well but I just wanted to do something quick

Doing something the quick way isn't always the best way.
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Not bad for first try
But maybe if you put some reflection in there (Only a bit) and maybe a background?
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HopeDesign wrote
Krumpify wrote I've got Photoshop as well but I just wanted to do something quick

Doing something the quick way isn't always the best way.
I meant I wanted to do something quick and simple but when I want to I will put more effort
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It looks pretty good but the shadowing looks awkward and the background being split into half black and half white does not look great in my opinion.

It's pretty good for your first try though
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