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#11. Posted:
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Pretty insane that this is your first piece of graphics work, looks pretty decent, I don't like the font you used too much but other than that it looks good.
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That looks very cool. I gave up because mine looks like i drew on paint *9clown*
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Looks pretty good, I would make it so the text doesn't overlap the dragon in the middle, but that's just personal preference
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I like it but it is a bit bland but I am positive with more practice you will creating awesome stuff.

Good first attempt.
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For this to be your first final piece of work, it's exceptional. Nice job.
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Good for first time, everyone starts off like that, keep it up!
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The color scheme and the gloss effect are pretty good for beginner.

I do suggest centering and placing the text better, along with working on spacing between elements. For example, the triangle is a bit too close to the D. It's commonly used to direct attention to, which is why it's usually spaced a tad further away. With it being so close to your text, it's sort of read with the text, if you get what I mean. Ten there's the search me text. It's way to close to the text below it. You should actually use a different font here to contrast it from the text bellow; maybe even use the green used for the arrow to change the test color.

I'd also suggest changing the color of the dragon to the green color used for the triangle, and giving it a bit of breathing room from both words.
#18. Posted:
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Clean first piece of work mate. I have to say, i especially like the dragon. You have blended it well with the text, and it looks very smooth. The background blends in well with the 2 greys, making it look professional. What font did you use for the text? Maybe you could try out some new fonts.

But overall, this is a nice piece of work.
Keep up the hard work and effort. Message me if you need help or advice.
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It looks really good and the dragon looks awesome! Nice work for your first time.
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