Anyone gonna rate or give me feedback?would appreciate it

I think it looks terrible. Color correction and some pictures is all it's really is. You even misspelled/didn't punctuate a lot of words.

0x539 wrote I think it looks terrible. Color correction and some pictures is all it's really is. You even misspelled/didn't punctuate a lot of words.

then tell me how i could improve not hate llf. and all the words are fixed .

-Triz- wrote

0x539 wrote I think it looks terrible. Color correction and some pictures is all it's really is. You even misspelled/didn't punctuate a lot of words.

then tell me how i could improve not hate llf. and all the words are fixed .

I don't see how I hated? I gave my opinion. And the way to fix it is to actually put effort into it. I could go download a GFX pack and enable a shitload of color corrections until I see one I like. I have an idea for it, but I don't know how to explain it at all lol.

0x539 wrote

-Triz- wrote

0x539 wrote I think it looks terrible. Color correction and some pictures is all it's really is. You even misspelled/didn't punctuate a lot of words.

then tell me how i could improve not hate llf. and all the words are fixed .

I don't see how I hated? I gave my opinion. And the way to fix it is to actually put effort into it. I could go download a GFX pack and enable a shitload of color corrections until I see one I like. I have an idea for it, but I don't know how to explain it at all lol.

i know its bad i didnt try that much but it turned out okay for like a 10 min peice of work llf.

Damn 0x went straight and poked at the heart, lol. I think you should balance out the contrast, pretty weird not going to lie with the outer parts real dark and inner parts to bright/hard light. Text feels burnt into it also with that hard lighting background.

Grammatical work?
Is'nt -> Isn't
Its -> It's
Wining -> Winning
I'm guessing you used "UR" instead of "Your" on purpose. Might also want to add a comma after winning.

Also, I like your logo.