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I know it's not 100% done but i would like some suggestions as to what i should do to it. thanks.
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I think it is a good first intro. It seems "too fast" even though intros should be fast. I like the beginning, but not the end, I can barely read the text. Bravo for making it though!
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HeyPerson wrote I know it's not 100% done but i would like some suggestions as to what i should do to it. thanks.



Any way that I could get you to make me one ? i'm not good at making intros . :c
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--Turtle-- wrote I think it is a good first intro. It seems "too fast" even though intros should be fast. I like the beginning, but not the end, I can barely read the text. Bravo for making it though!
yeah its not my first into..this is just my first edit at it. thanks for your feedback though. The last part of it is really a bitch, but i did lengthen it up a bit.
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HeyPerson wrote I know it's not 100% done but i would like some suggestions as to what i should do to it. thanks.



Any way that I could get you to make me one ? i'm not good at making intros . :c


I was actually thinking about just making a tutorial on how to do this.
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HeyPerson wrote
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HeyPerson wrote I know it's not 100% done but i would like some suggestions as to what i should do to it. thanks.



Any way that I could get you to make me one ? i'm not good at making intros . :c


I was actually thinking about just making a tutorial on how to do this.



If you would that would be great !
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