Maybe next time mention you followed a tutorial, that's all...

Not much to say as it is a replica of someone else's work.

But you did a good job never the less. Take what you have learned into a project that's of your own.

You can follow tutorials to practice when you're a beginner, but I wouldn't post anything and call it "your work" until you make up something yourself.

There's really no point in posting an image copied from a tutorial.

"here's my work"

Please mention it's from a tutorial..

Not going to rate since it's not your own

Looks weird with the flare and a weird CC, need to blend the background with the image as well

-Derpsa wrote Well guy's this is my first attempt, I've gone all out and purchased various software and GFX packs. I've purchased a subscription to the Adobe Creative Cloud, I've purchased Cinema 4D and 1 of the many packs I've paid for is the: VideoCopilot Evolution DVD filled with textures! Anyway, here's my work:

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that is unreal its still hard to follow off of a tutorial on your first time aswell.

good job bro.