v1 is definitely a lot better, the planes don't blend at all. they don't really fit in either the proportions don't make sense. that's just what i saw. i like the motion effect you did with the jets though same with the round hit effects the creativity is there but it just needs some work.

Injustice wrote v1 is definitely a lot better, the planes don't blend at all. they don't really fit in either the proportions don't make sense. that's just what i saw. i like the motion effect you did with the jets though same with the round hit effects the creativity is there but it just needs some work.

I think it was a joke that he added the jets into the picture.. They clearly don't belong there, I thought it was funny. I really don't think he intended on it being a legit addition to a realistic picture like the one he posted to put jet airplanes shooting lasers..

Come on, now.

Alphax wrote

Injustice wrote v1 is definitely a lot better, the planes don't blend at all. they don't really fit in either the proportions don't make sense. that's just what i saw. i like the motion effect you did with the jets though same with the round hit effects the creativity is there but it just needs some work.

I think it was a joke that he added the jets into the picture.. They clearly don't belong there, I thought it was funny. I really don't think he intended on it being a legit addition to a realistic picture like the one he posted to put jet airplanes shooting lasers..

Come on, now.

^ What he said.

Although I do appreciate the feedback, thank you.

Ugh im jealous why cant mine do photoshop >_>..the disappointment..any ways looks nice has some nice depth *Dramatic Thumbs Up* and the v2 lol i didnt expect that.

This is a change illustrated. A nice change also, great work.

First one is better, the second just looks to "un-realistic". Nevertheless, two great peices.

The first version is very good, but adding those stupid jets just ruined it. I'll give the version 1 9/10 but for the version 2 2/10 just because the elephants are still there.

Why are the still comments about the second version lol , It was clear in the first place it was meant as a joke , He then confirmed it and people are still giving feedback / Rating the second version? xD

Anyway good job on the first image , Bet your GF loved the second one haha xD.

CompleteDesigns wrote Why are the still comments about the second version lol , It was clear in the first place it was meant as a joke , He then confirmed it and people are still giving feedback / Rating the second version? xD

Anyway good job on the first image , Bet your GF loved the second one haha xD.

Nice indirect message their. I didn't read the messages before hand so I didn't know people already corrected that.

Lye wrote

CompleteDesigns wrote Why are the still comments about the second version lol , It was clear in the first place it was meant as a joke , He then confirmed it and people are still giving feedback / Rating the second version? xD

Anyway good job on the first image , Bet your GF loved the second one haha xD.

Nice indirect message their. I didn't read the messages before hand so I didn't know people already corrected that.

Didn't you know though , With a designer as skilled as Illustrated why he would add Jets etc to a piece that is designed to be peaceful and nice , Also if he tried creating a nice peacefull piece with his girlfriend - Why would he add jets as a real attempt to make improvements to the peace?

Just thought it was strange how you guys were giving real feedback on it thats all/