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My best Intro EVER
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darkville0124
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Leave feedback about what you think or what i should improve in

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Kinghunter
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SICKKKKKKK! I'm in need of one btw
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I don't really like it. Its just basically a bunch of flares with background footage in the back.

Also, the animation on the text looks bad.

You need to have better alignment as well.
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this could be improved alot, try and keep things plain and simple, not many people are into stuff like that, but dont give up just keep trying
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Axe wrote I don't really like it. Its just basically a bunch of flares with background footage in the back.

Also, the animation on the text looks bad.

You need to have better alignment as well.

I totally agree with Axe.. Its kinda annoying that is looks like everything is in a rectangle.. Looks like you got a camera and just was recording a intro from youtube. And was just twisting your camera.. If it was your first one that would be cool and unique for ur first one. But yah. This is all my opinions.
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