Took some of the advice on board and produced this (starter):



Feedback please.

he still looks dry. And he doesn't look like he blends with the background.

Injustice wrote he still looks dry. And he doesn't look like he blends with the background.

Damn, sorry Injustice. I will add a filter on him now.
Do you know any decent ones that will set me on my tracks?

pulsev wrote Took some of the advice on board and produced this (starter):

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Feedback please.

The colours with the background and the rendered man don't suit each other. Also the background render imo looks worse than the original, look at the path and look at his body, the angles are all wrong. Also if it was raining then surely there would be rain in front of the man? I just think the render doesn't suit the background full stop. I mean the man is almost cartoon olike where as the background is like a real street. Lastly the shadow behind him, need sot be gone, it looks like he is even more out the scene.

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pulsev wrote Took some of the advice on board and produced this (starter):

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Feedback please.

The colours with the background and the rendered man don't suit each other. Also the background render imo looks worse than the original, look at the path and look at his body, the angles are all wrong. Also if it was raining then surely there would be rain in front of the man? I just think the render doesn't suit the background full stop. I mean the man is almost cartoon olike where as the background is like a real street. Lastly the shadow behind him, need sot be gone, it looks like he is even more out the scene.

Will get on that right away sir.

I personally think I've messed up Spiderman Noir.

I have added in a filter on both the walls and character called plastic wrap to make the scene look wet and damp but more cartooney in a way.

I have also added in a low contrast black section along the street floor to blend in with the dark theme.

thoughts?

pulsev wrote I personally think I've messed up Spiderman Noir.

I have added in a filter on both the walls and character called plastic wrap to make the scene look wet and damp but more cartooney in a way.

I have also added in a low contrast black section along the street floor to blend in with the dark theme.

thoughts?

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This looks a lot better than the original, in my opinion. Nice to see you taking some feedback into consideration.

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pulsev wrote I personally think I've messed up Spiderman Noir.

I have added in a filter on both the walls and character called plastic wrap to make the scene look wet and damp but more cartooney in a way.

I have also added in a low contrast black section along the street floor to blend in with the dark theme.

thoughts?

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This looks a lot better than the original, in my opinion. Nice to see you taking some feedback into consideration.

Thanks man, still room for improvement, any more tips for me?

Anyone else? I really want to improve this piece.

Looks a lot better. But it seems a little over exposed/saturated tone it down a little. Glad your taking the feedback positively.