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A fresh sound, The start. (Amended)
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ImDan
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Hi there! I'm new to the music producing scene and I was hoping you gentlemen could give some constructive criticism on my first track, I hope you enjoy the song and any Likes or comments are much appreciated, thanks guys!

Thanks to your comments I have edited the track using your very helpful comments and released the track on Soundcloud! Many thanks gents.


Released on 28/01/2014 Enjoy!
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Bum bum bum bum, dun dun dun dun, eeeee eee eeee eeee eee eee eeeee.
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Oh time to construct, great work. I like the piano and the older style to it **** the new type of dubstep with screaming and ****. I like the classics.
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Too slow, need to pick it up a little, make that first drop a big one. don't hold back brother
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Nice use of piano, if you are a beginner this isn't bad. Kinda off sync drums but they end up locking in right. A nice catchy sound. I would move the BPM up on it a bit though. After 3.10 when it picks up is the best part in my opinion. Keep up the work and I can see this being played in clubs.
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Definitely pick up the tempo, not many people are gonna rave to this. But i like what you have in mind
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Thanks for the comments gents, I've gone back to work on the track to improve it after your comments, much appreciated!
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