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What do you think of my short rap?
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Hey guys.
What do you guys think of this short rap i just made?
I just started rapping..And i'm only 15 so yeah.

I would love some feedback!

Thank you so much.
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DOWNLOADED! I dont even care that much for rap. This actually got to me, reminds me of my ex. I would finish this out as a complete song bro.
9.5/10
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Hey. Thanks for replying!

And...Yeah. I kinda have a thing for not finishing raps because of my lack of confidence.

But i think as i get better i'll start making longer raps and stuff.
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Not too bad!
You actually have some pretty chill rap. ;)
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Well finish this one bro, its great. Keep posting here and email me when you make another!
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This is actually really good, nice job!
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Products wrote Hey. Thanks for replying!

And...Yeah. I kinda have a thing for not finishing raps because of my lack of confidence.

But i think as i get better i'll start making longer raps and stuff.
You should definitely make them longer, that wasn't that bad man!
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Wow. Thanks guys!

And will do.
I'll start finishing it now actually.
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