Thats your first!?

That is really good! 8/10
Well done, keep up the good work

Illustrated wrote It needs a lot of work.

First of all, you shouldn't use 3D text on a flat 2D space.
The lighting on the test is pretty bad, as well.
Try downloading a light room if you're going to keep using C4D... But you shouldn't.

The stroke looks bad around the text again, because it's a 2D stroke around a 3D object.
And not to mention there's a bunch of white spaces in between.

Then you just have what seems like random pictures thrown onto it.
Pictures of girls... so creative and original. Never seen that on youtube before...
It'd be a lot better off without any of the pictures. Especially stupid **** drugs. ;)

You could do a lot more with this. It's pretty basic, and simple.

Thanks for the feedback, and like I said it was my first ever banner and I tought myself how to do this. I didn't watch anything so I didn't know about all of this. Thanks again

Aggie wrote I really am not a fan of it, it just seems like thinks were added in to take up space.

I can see what you mean with the pictures. Thanks and I will make my next one better (:

Daki wrote Thats your first!?

That is really good! 8/10
Well done, keep up the good work

Thanks! And yeah I used photoshop before but not for stuff like this so I knew a little bit.

Really nice, clean work. I really like it! But just work on your 3d effect; it could be improved. I just made a 2d banner for my clan. Look :')

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(The lines are still there because it's in photoshop still) :p
Also thinking about making templates and releasing them to TTG :')

Love OFWGKTA, and it's pretty sickk, but try more screening and changing opacity levels. And maybe some color correction c:

-Medkits

yeah remove that women on the right and the logo at the small picture on the top left corner

Awesome_John wrote yeah remove that women on the right and the logo at the small picture on the top left corner

The small picture is there because thats his logo on youtube. It isn't actually on the banner. He just took an image of what it looks like when the banner is on his channel - explaining why the small image in the top left is there.

-Tag wrote

Really nice, clean work. I really like it! But just work on your 3d effect; it could be improved. I just made a 2d banner for my clan. Look :')

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(The lines are still there because it's in photoshop still) :p
Also thinking about making templates and releasing them to TTG :')

Alright I will try that! And very nice 2D banner!

Medkits wrote Love OFWGKTA, and it's pretty sickk, but try more screening and changing opacity levels. And maybe some color correction c:

-Medkits

Yeah I need to work on color correction, but thanks and OFWGKTA is awesome!