Not bad, this is your first try?, what services and prices are you providing to the community

For your first 8/10. Very clean keep it up

HyBridZx wrote Not bad, this is your first try?, what services and prices are you providing to the community

My first go at it. The shop won't be until weeks to come, need to get all my work to a professional level before I can start charging but I will be doing some free shops.

very clean but for me i dont like the text color of orange.. thats just me but very good job 9/10

9/10
you could practice making me a avatar and sig?

Well, all the best of luck towards your shop and business, hope it works out and you never know maybe i'll ask for some graphics some day

-FZ- wrote 9/10
you could practice making me a avatar and sig?

Yeah sure, pm me or post on here what you would like then I'd love to give it a try!

Well my first suggestion is you should not advertise yourself as a 'professional' with claims of professional designs. It is clear that you are still a beginner and even I would not call myself a professional by any means.

On Topic:
-The fade lines do not completely fade at the ends (consider soft erasing the ends).
-The color coordination is far off with the red/orangish text (possibly a more fitting color).
-The general font does not fit the image style
-The text effects are VERY basic and used far too often

Other Tips:
-Consider adding texture to the background, as it is flat at the moment.
-Consider adding some external dramatic lighting to give the image some feeling.
-Consider adding more content in general to the base image.

If you need any help feel free to PM me, and I will respond as soon as I have time to.