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Our generation - Written by a 14 year old. Genius?
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I saw this popping up on Facebook today. I don't know how you would call something like this, but i actually found this pretty interesting and worth sharing with you.

This was written by a 14 year old ( as the Original Poster wrote ). Please take your time to fully ready this, it will be worth your time!

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This is a very nice little poem, and the back to front thing was a nifty trick.
There are some parts which don't really make much sense, if you take them as a whole, like the:
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If you take that as a whole piece reading it forward, it doesn't make too much sense.
"Nobody will say we were the peak of mankind, that is wrong, our generation was a failure."
'That is wrong' doesn't fit.

Anyway, I'm being pedantic, for what it is, it's brilliant.
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This poem actually pissed me off until I got to this part;
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Kia can vouch, I was very upset.
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This poem actually makes sense. This kid is very smart.
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This poem didn't click in to me, until I saw the last verse.
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When I actually red from bottom to up, everything seemed a bit better to me.
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