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Self Portrait Illustration (Collab with Illustrated)
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I made this Self Portrait Illustration, as a collaboration with Erik (Illustrated).

I did the line work, and base coloring.
He did the lighting, shading, and some touching up.



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This looks pretty good.

You did a great job. The lines are smooth, and the color choices are good.
I don't know if I could have done it better, myself. You're learning fast.

Just, don't get so frustrated, haha.
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Consider lowering some of the line opacities, such as the ones around the lips, it gives for a softer look.
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Zef wrote Consider lowering some of the line opacities, such as the ones around the lips, it gives for a softer look.


I knew I was forgetting something! *facepalm* thank you.
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As Zef said, some of the lines are very bold, and stand out more than they probably should. Especially on the chin.

Other than that, it looks really quite good. Nice piece of work you have here.
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Very good piece of work Illustrations are something I am yet to explore.
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Paint_Brush wrote Very good piece of work Illustrations are something I am yet to explore.

Thank you. And I'm just starting out doing illustrations. I hope to expand my knowledge and maybe try different things.
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This is nice man. Really clean and clear. Keep up the nice work man .
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Kazehana wrote This is nice man. Really clean and clear. Keep up the nice work man .

Lol I'm a chick, but thank you
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it's nice but the eyebrows look weird
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