I watched the first video, and noticed a few things. You need to kind of slow down when you talk. I noticed that you were kind of tripping over your words. Slowing down and actually controlling your breathing can possibly help with this.

Also, know generally what you are going to say, because if you wing it, it won't come out as you really want it to. Having a plan is always a good idea.

Axe wrote I watched the first video, and noticed a few things. You need to kind of slow down when you talk. I noticed that you were kind of tripping over your words. Slowing down and actually controlling your breathing can possibly help with this.

Also, know generally what you are going to say, because if you wing it, it won't come out as you really want it to. Having a plan is always a good idea.

Yea that is what I am known for! Most Youtubers try and come off as the best speakers, etc. but I am just doing it first try and showing people that I am not perfect and some people enjoy that! But thanks for the opinion! <3

Yo bos ive been at your channel for a looong time about the second vid. or so ive seen almost all ur vids and i enjoy the content there is always going to be haters out there i know it you know it, your really good at what you do and the gta v community is really interested in the type of vids. u post keep up the good work maybe we can play sometime? my Gt:Ollieos i totally understand if we cant because you have alot of subs and friend requests

I think that you have pretty good content, but it sounds like you are nervous whenever you are commentarying (if thats a word). I think that you'll get better over time with this as you become more comfortable posting and doing YouTube videos.

Video quality is great.

However the commentary needs to be worked on. Just like what axe said, "Slowing down and actually controlling your breathing can possibly help with this."

Another suggestion is that you should probably add some background music(not to loud, just enough to let the viewers hear) . Not random music, but music that will fit perfectly with the subject, commentary, or gameplay. Stay away from Metal music.

Ollieos wrote Yo bos ive been at your channel for a looong time about the second vid. or so ive seen almost all ur vids and i enjoy the content there is always going to be haters out there i know it you know it, your really good at what you do and the gta v community is really interested in the type of vids. u post keep up the good work maybe we can play sometime? my Gt:Ollieos i totally understand if we cant because you have alot of subs and friend requests

Thanks for the support man but sorry for the late reply! and yea sure we can play sometimes! I think you know my gamertag! Just add me, I will be playing GTA V later today!

Voiceovers wrote I think that you have pretty good content, but it sounds like you are nervous whenever you are commentarying (if thats a word). I think that you'll get better over time with this as you become more comfortable posting and doing YouTube videos.

Thanks for the Input man ill try to become more unnervous (if that's a word) ;P

Wortheirlemon wrote Video quality is great.

However the commentary needs to be worked on. Just like what axe said, "Slowing down and actually controlling your breathing can possibly help with this."

Another suggestion is that you should probably add some background music(not to loud, just enough to let the viewers hear) . Not random music, but music that will fit perfectly with the subject, commentary, or gameplay. Stay away from Metal music.

So like a slow mellow type of Jam. Not words just jams? If so that can be done when I do comms!