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Its kinda dark, try making a new layer getting white brush and paint over it then lower the opacity on the layer you made with the white paint then it should lighten up a little bit, or you can try use a flare
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Ferz wrote Its kinda dark, try making a new layer getting white brush and paint over it then lower the opacity on the layer you made with the white paint then it should lighten up a little bit, or you can try use a flare
Okay Ill try that when I finish work. Thanks for your honest opinion
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it looks sick! but yeah its a bit dark
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T-33 wrote it looks sick! but yeah its a bit dark
Thanks, Same again thanks for your opinion
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Way too cluttered.
So much going on, it's hard to focus on one thing.
Maybe remove a little bit.

Way too dark.
The parts that aren't dark are too bright.
I'd suggest toning down your color correction a bit.

The text is almost unreadable.
I'd suggest just dumping the C4D text, and using some good ole 2D text.
Either that, or just make it not so broken up.
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