Can I ask what the font is called that you used for the top left logo?
thanks

From the image if the bird onwards the design goes down hill. The gif is horrid with the design and looks out of place. Also the bits below I don't understand why they're there, it just seems like a messy design beause of some of the stuff looking pointless. (the gif, colour palette etc...)

ySense wrote From the image if the bird onwards the design goes down hill. The gif is horrid with the design and looks out of place. Also the bits below I don't understand why they're there, it just seems like a messy design beause of some of the stuff looking pointless. (the gif, colour palette etc...)

Its just small things I created days ago, as I am currently working with the full page. But the bird image would of been apart of the parallax scrolling if I was to code it. Sadly I don't even have the time to even finish this, but ill find a way. haha

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tandrop wrote Can I ask what the font is called that you used for the top left logo?
thanks

Wisdom Script

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Revision four now uploaded, changes to the splash screen layout. Although still work in progress

It's slowly coming together lol.....

I would prefer the logo central. It leaves to much space underneath.

The active page indicator is pretty hard to see. Other than that, it's not much to give feedback on..

If you plan on freelancing, time definitely needs to be improved. It certainly shouldn't take a week to design a homepage that consists of a header and background image. If I was the client, I would surely expect a lot more done in a weeks time; maybe even go as far as expecting the first complete site mock-up to be done. I would expect a week for the coding (mostly testing and debugging), but surely not the homepage design. I understand this is just practice, but time management should also be practiced; especially when working with clients.

RoR wrote The active page indicator is pretty hard to see. Other than that, it's not much to give feedback on..

If you plan on freelancing, time definitely needs to be improved. It certainly shouldn't take a week to design a homepage that consists of a header and background image. If I was the client, I would surely expect a lot more done in a weeks time; maybe even go as far as expecting the first complete site mock-up to be done. I would expect a week for the coding (mostly testing and debugging), but surely not the homepage design. I understand this is just practice, but time management should also be practiced; especially when working with clients.

I barely spent time on the design its self honestly. I am busy with school, social life, and other projects that have deadlines. Although I do plan to finish this concept soon.