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First Web Design {Speed Art}
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Hey guys, my first go at web design and my first speed art in almost 2 years! If you enjoy it feel free to comment on the post or video!

Constructive criticism is appreciated!

Speed Art


Final Image
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Thanks, WlLL.
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Really nice! Keep up the good work bro.
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Some of the alignment just needs work.

[ Register or Signin to view external links. ] "Our"

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And the logos, on the sale banner.
I was say "Free Spalsh sticker with all orders over $10."
Not "logo" because that could be confusing.

I'd also remove the vertical line in the center of that ad.
And lower the opacity on that light part you have on it.
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Looking good but as Illustrated mentioned there are just a few things you'd need to consider editing! By the way, what's the title of the song?
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Thanks for the feedback guys! I'll make sure I check the alignment in future designs, this was just a practice anyway!

Also, the song name is:

Haunted by Witty. He's a great upcoming rap artist!

Thanks, WlLL.
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its not bad buddy looks pretty cool!
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Thats really good keep it up
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WlLL wrote Thanks for the feedback guys! I'll make sure I check the alignment in future designs, this was just a practice anyway!

Also, the song name is:

Haunted by Witty. He's a great upcoming rap artist!

Thanks, WlLL.
Definitely great none of the less! and thank you, song's great.
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when it says
" Check out some of our products!"
Of should be a small word.
And Our or Products should be a big word.
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