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XeRemix
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Hi all, this is my first background. Just posting it to see what others think of it. If your going to post something negative make sure it's helping not hurting or belittling or else you will just be reported. So here it is!

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Looks pretty ugly, to be honest. Just overloaded with renders and complied images. The text is hardly visible.

Honestly I think you need some practice. I can tell where you are, most designers go through stages like this. I get it, just know that practice will get you far. Try cleaner styles and add more of your own work and not so many already existing renders.

Just practice.
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^^^ what he said, but honestly it looks like you got a render off google, then made the text then turned down the Opacity.

However, looks like you have a good sense of creativity. If you need help with anything, feel free to PM me or add me on skype: Mxrkus

Good luck man.
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MRKN wrote ^^^ what he said, but honestly it looks like you got a render off google, then made the text then turned down the Opacity.

However, looks like you have a good sense of creativity. If you need help with anything, feel free to PM me or add me on skype: Mxrkus

Good luck man.

Thanks for the opinions both of you.. But I didn't get it off of google but I totally agree with you.
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Well for your first..meh. But try experimenting with something other than just text and stocks bro..keep trying though. Practice makes Perfect.
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not bad for your first one. You will get better. I rate you a 5/10
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