Hmm this is a tricky one. I believe the original illustration has alot of potential to be something special. I dont like the final t shirt design but thats just my flavour of colors (im not a fan of bright green shirts) The original illustration is a good concept and a solid piece of work. BUT it can be improved. Some of the lines dont look right, for example the jagged lines above and below the mouth. They dont suit the rest of the lines. I think it would look very nice with some colors added to it and if you spent a generous amount of time on it, add some shading aswell. Could turn out smashing. Still though a strong attempt, keep it up and your illustration skills will be great with more and more practice. Well done mate

The final illustration is good, need some work with shadows and lines.

The t-shirt for me is horrid. Looks like it would be for a 4 year old. Bad choice of colour, the text looks horrid and the image for me is placed all wrong.

The illustration is good, but, the t-shirt for me isn't.