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What_schoko2
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Sorry when i post in the wrong forum.
(My Old TTG Account is 3years old but i lost my pw "whata_schoko", so that was my first post with the new account)

I'm from Germany and my Homeworks was to ride a text "application" but my english is not good and for you it was easy because you speak english

Here is the Text:

Dear Sir or Madam,

I would like to apply for a job in your summer camp. I'm from Germany and I want to work in your summer camp because i'd like to work with children. I have a strong knowledge in English, so i have no problems to communicate with kids and in germany i completed my work experience in a kindergarden.
I have a lot of questions about the work in your camp: How many hours I work per day? and how much money I earn per Month?

Thanks for read my application and I hope that I receive a reply from you

yours faithfully,

xxx



Is the English okay? or are some rates wrong?

It helps me a lot! thank you.


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Dear Sir or Madam,

I would like to apply for a job in your summer camp. I'm from Germany and I want to work in your summer camp because I'd like to work with children. I have a strong knowledge of the English language. This means I will have no problems communicating with the children. Also whilst in Germany I completed my work experience in a nursery.
I have a lot of questions about the work in your camp: How many hours will I work per day? And how much money can I earn per Month?

Thanks for reading my application and I hope that I receive a reply from you.

Yours faithfully,



There you go. Good luck with your English work.


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I edited some words for you. This is a lot better in my opinion!


Dear Sir or Madam,

I would like to apply for a job in your summer camp. I'm from Germany and I want to work for you because I like to work with children. I have a strong knowledge in English, so I have no problems in communicating with kids. In Germany I completed my work experience in a kindergarten.
I have a lot of questions about the work in your camp: How many hours I work per day? and how much money I earn per Month?

Thanks for reading my application and I hope that I receive a reply from you

yours faithfully,

xxx
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What_schoko2
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Thanks TSNYC and thanks EnjoixLife you guys helps me a lot!
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What_schoko2 wrote Thanks TSNYC and thanks EnjoixLife you guys helps me a lot!

You're welcome! They're pretty much the same! He just used different words. So pick which one you like best!
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You really want to be pointing out your speciality's
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