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I made a logo for a DJ company called "BaseLINE". I posted a Logo i made for them around 2 days ago. I got some good criticism and decided to make a new one but with more effort. I took out the red square as some said it had no meaning a they were correct. It didn't. So i decided to make the Bassline logo again but with more meaning......and yes the logos are simple. Exactly the look im going for.

First Effort

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Definate improvement

Now make it a vector and your good to go
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Thanks Asymmetrical. Im not sure if it was you gave me the criticism but if it was thank you.!
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I didn't like the first one, it looks amateurish. The second one is a definite improvement and works well as a logo. If there's one thing that could be improved, it could be the spacing between the bottom of the letters and the line. Try making the base line a little thinner , so the gap between the bottom of the letters and the line is the same as the other gap (the strikethrough on the text). You should also make it in vector format.

Great work, looking forward to seeing more.
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Thanks Pin. I understand what you're trying to say and when I look at the logo it does make sense to make the bottom underline thinner.
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Thanks VAW exact look I want.
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Not so Much the First one.
But the second one I like.
Good Work
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Thanks vaporium, appreciate it.
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I like the second one a lot better and so that's the one all this is directed towards (also I'm honestly pretty god awful at logos myself, so take what I have to say with a grain of salt)

Overall the idea is great, clean, and pretty professional. However, I don't like the font choice. I think a thinner font without the line "strike-through" would look better. To go with this, the underline should probably also be thinner.
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x3ternal_HavocX wrote I like the second one a lot better and so that's the one all this is directed towards (also I'm honestly pretty god awful at logos myself, so take what I have to say with a grain of salt)

Overall the idea is great, clean, and pretty professional. However, I don't like the font choice. I think a thinner font without the line "strike-through" would look better. To go with this, the underline should probably also be thinner.


I get what your saying bro. Choosing the correct font is not a strong point of mine haha. I was searching so long for what I thought was the correct font. I think I should make the underline the same size as the strike through, I think it would make it more even if you know what I mean.
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