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So i made this a little while back but i want to know yall's opinions on it.
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Half way done
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Proof in photoshop
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Pros: you have a nice set of renders

Cons:
-Renders do not blend with background
-No shading/blending
-Color correction is way too extreme
-The stocks in the sky don't make sense (the crack)
-Lens flares don't blend


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It is not very good, try not to plaster color correction, unneeded stocks, unneeded renders, and unneeded flares.


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I actually love your work. Should go for the badge GFX King.
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Heir wrote Pros: you have a nice set of renders

Cons:
-Renders do not blend with background
-No shading/blending
-Color correction is way too extreme
-The stocks in the sky don't make sense (the crack)
-Lens flares don't blend


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It is not very good, try not to plaster color correction, unneeded stocks, unneeded renders, and unneeded flares.
Thanks for the advice it was one of my first projects i thought it looked cool lol
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-Tupac wrote I actually love your work. Should go for the badge GFX King.
Thanks for the compliments man means a lot
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There is very LITTLE originality within this. There are also way too many renders, stocks, and too much noise going on in the background. All in all, this has TOO much, take some of this away and make it more original to yourself rather than plastering others renders and what not.
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Looks sick but need more practice Good work broo
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I mean you could say it is under saturated and blends really well and there is a clear depth and lighting composition but that would be a complete lie.

This is a typical first manip - keep working at them and learn more about what is involved. Some of the major points mentioned above.
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Just looks like you piled a bunch of stocks onto each-other.
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