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Rate 1/10

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Not really a manipulation, more of an abstract piece.
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The colors could use some work. Also not a fan of those thick black circles. Pretty nice job overall though, its a good concept
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those circles are the first thing that caught my attention. Try to make them lighter and more blended into the background. Its a pretty good piece but just improve on your focal points.
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Thanks For the ideas will make sure to improve in some areas

Added one more, the next I will try to improve more, I really like where I'm going with these...
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Jayrawb wrote Thanks For the ideas will make sure to improve in some areas

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I think that the circles gotta go. They are grabbing a lot of attention and thats no needed.
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That's really nice man! I like it alot! 8/10!
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That new one is much better,
the circles actually work on that one imo
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I personally feel that the second one is much better and flows better than the original one that you did. Nice job on these man!
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Thanks will be working on another one soon ... will keep you guy posted. thank you for the feedback from everyone.
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