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"The King" v2| CC Testing | Before & After | Feedback
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Hey there guys,
here is a picture I found floating around on the internet and decided to
use to practice on my color correction and curves so and feedback and opinions would be great!

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Personally, I like it! Nice job man!
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Taking the text out of the equation, the CC and fire blending is pretty good, one thing I believe this needs is the leg (right of image) sticks out a bit too much, maybe add some artificial subtle shading to it. The way his legs are positioned in the pitch does not help its cause either but that is unavoidable.
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As Zef has said, I'll base it without the text being there.


I really like this, the flaming ball really looks great.

The only things I'd say is the background. I think it looks a bit plain? Maybe add a tiny bit of blur to it? And maybe darken or just add some shading to his left leg (The one thats sticking out in front) It is very bright compared to the rest of him.

Nice work!
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Thanks for the feedback, I tried fixing the leg a bit so let me know what you think.

P.S. yeah the text isn't supposed to taken seriously by the way haha, just there to give him an identity
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It looks good I guess but why did you darken the background?
You should of just taken all the saturated out of it.

So what I am saying is you need to lighten the background.
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CriticaI wrote
It looks good I guess but why did you darken the background?
You should of just taken all the saturated out of it.

So what I am saying is you need to lighten the background.

Thanks for the feedback Critical
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ya its a good job man nice work
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