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Hey guys I was wondering if you could give me feedback on two of my songs
soundcloud.com/upcozy/0-100-zack-haas

soundcloud.com/upcozy/whips-chicks-zack-haas
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Not bad, I like it to be honest with you! Keep at it bro
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Thanks man I really appreciate it
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To me you sound like Lil Wayne

To my ears you are bringing pain

If you like this guy's rap you aren't sane

Rhymes like this should be slain.


Feedback for your rap? Honestly it crap

Back to the drawing board

Do it right you may have success like Harrison Ford

Check back here soon with your new lyrics

We're more than happy to be your critics.
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Gigahertz wrote To me you sound like Lil Wayne

To my ears you are bringing pain

If you like this guy's rap you aren't sane

Rhymes like this should be slain.


Feedback for your rap? Honestly it crap

Back to the drawing board

Do it right you may have success like Harrison Ford

Check back here soon with your new lyrics

We're more than happy to be your critics.


lovin this reply so here's mine,
It's about time you started re-writing your rhymes.
this rap is for the original poster, making him nervous like he was on a roller coaster, I'm burnin you like you was in a toaster.
Keep it up though g, even though you bow down to me, it's time for me n gigahertz to flee we will come back at half three, to see if you battled me.
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Aye. Wanna hop on a track with me?
hit me up if interested.
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yeah man for sureeeeeeeeee
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Gigahertz wrote To me you sound like Lil Wayne

To my ears you are bringing pain

If you like this guy's rap you aren't sane

Rhymes like this should be slain.


Feedback for your rap? Honestly it crap

Back to the drawing board

Do it right you may have success like Harrison Ford

Check back here soon with your new lyrics

We're more than happy to be your critics.

did you really just rhyme rap with crap ?
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