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Dropped my second single today. Check it out. (Rap)
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DeWreck
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I am a 17 Year Old rapper from the Chicago area. I dropped the second single from my upcoming mixtape "Lyrics From My Mind". Check it out and let me know what you think.

Second single:


Debut single that dropped last week:


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dope homie! cant wait for the tape to come out!
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A-Son wrote dope homie! cant wait for the tape to come out!

Thanks man, hopefully it should be out in the next month or 2.
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In my opinion its pretty bad. Don't wanna seem harsh.

Doesn't sound like rapping the lyrics do and all but its like your dragging your voice.

Sorry man, just putting my opinion.
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-DCFC wrote In my opinion its pretty bad. Don't wanna seem harsh.

Doesn't sound like rapping the lyrics do and all but its like your dragging your voice.

Sorry man, just putting my opinion.

I appreciate the feedback, but dragging my voice? Could you explain that a little better?
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Raps seems choppy, doenst flow the best. But i dig the beat.
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DeWreck wrote
-DCFC wrote In my opinion its pretty bad. Don't wanna seem harsh.

Doesn't sound like rapping the lyrics do and all but its like your dragging your voice.

Sorry man, just putting my opinion.

I appreciate the feedback, but dragging my voice? Could you explain that a little better?
Like seems words go on for longer to make it go to the beat which isn't how rap goes. I'm not simon cowell so i can't give you that many tips as im no expert at all.

Like seems it doesn't flow. Im not too sure sorry i cant explain it the best
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Yoke wrote Raps seems choppy, doenst flow the best. But i dig the beat.

Thanks, and I'm still trying to find MY flow. This is only the second song I've ever made.
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-DCFC wrote
DeWreck wrote
-DCFC wrote In my opinion its pretty bad. Don't wanna seem harsh.

Doesn't sound like rapping the lyrics do and all but its like your dragging your voice.

Sorry man, just putting my opinion.

I appreciate the feedback, but dragging my voice? Could you explain that a little better?
Like seems words go on for longer to make it go to the beat which isn't how rap goes. I'm not simon cowell so i can't give you that many tips as im no expert at all.

Like seems it doesn't flow. Im not too sure sorry i cant explain it the best

I understand what you're saying, and I will work on fixing that. I'm literally just starting out so I'm not going to make any songs perfect right now. But that is something I will fix for the future.
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DeWreck wrote
-DCFC wrote
DeWreck wrote
-DCFC wrote In my opinion its pretty bad. Don't wanna seem harsh.

Doesn't sound like rapping the lyrics do and all but its like your dragging your voice.

Sorry man, just putting my opinion.

I appreciate the feedback, but dragging my voice? Could you explain that a little better?
Like seems words go on for longer to make it go to the beat which isn't how rap goes. I'm not simon cowell so i can't give you that many tips as im no expert at all.

Like seems it doesn't flow. Im not too sure sorry i cant explain it the best

I understand what you're saying, and I will work on fixing that. I'm literally just starting out so I'm not going to make any songs perfect right now. But that is something I will fix for the future.
Ok i look forward to hearing new songs. Glad you've taken the Constructive criticism well.
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