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please give me some feedback. it's my first one lol and my flow is like bones/sesh type. thank you
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This is not the contribution that the Hip/Hop community need man..

Be real, we need to bring good music to the radio not the coke snorting and weed smoking.

Your flow is pretty good actually but honestly the lyrics just kill me, hate the way the community has changed into smoking weed, getting money and killing people.

Sorry to be harsh just trying to make you think differently.
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Music is way to loud man can't even hear you
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Wan wrote This is not the contribution that the Hip/Hop community need man..

Be real, we need to bring good music to the radio not the coke snorting and weed smoking.

Your flow is pretty good actually but honestly the lyrics just kill me, hate the way the community has changed into smoking weed, getting money and killing people.

Sorry to be harsh just trying to make you think differently.


haha it's wasn't harsh man thank you for the feedback. and when I say "mary jane's my baby" I was actually talking about my fiance. but thanks again for the feedback
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