Are you new? If you are, you're great for not only starting out, but I like the flow and the instrumental song with your rap. Obviously there are things which could be improved, but I could not expect that from on singular person only just starting rap

Keep doing it bro, you're doing a good job

Thank you thank you everyone

New song coming very soon

It was pretty good, honestly though that seemed too slow for your type of rapping. Also I would like to point out that you need a little more enthusiasm when you rap get loud get hype like make me feel like you are going off on that shit dude!

Overall though good job just thought I would give helpful feedback!

put more emtion into your voice, louder like eminem...but you sound just like cam meekins

New song on soundcloud check it out

AriGrande wrote You were doing good then it turned into what am I listening to this is dog sh!t when you started talking about biggie or what ever
The key thing to rap is keeping it real

I have to agree with him. Had me until that point. Then it just got bad. Keep practicing though!

Unbind wrote

AriGrande wrote You were doing good then it turned into what am I listening to this is dog sh!t when you started talking about biggie or what ever
The key thing to rap is keeping it real

I have to agree with him. Had me until that point. Then it just got bad. Keep practicing though!

Thanks for the feedback but if you listen I kept it real, just the beat changed from 0-100 to Kick in the Door, which is why i said "then Ima kick in the door like biggie"

The transition into Biggie's ''Kick in the Door''
was rough and trashed the track was repetitive and the lyrics were garbage other than that not bad