Not my type of video but hey, we all have our own opinions.
Personally, I'd try to get more commentary in there or just some more liveliness. Seems very boring on your end lol

For the video embedded in the post? This video was mainly focused on my friend dying a lot. Thank you for the feedback though!

watching people die isnt funny 2 me unless its in a weird way, i did like the one clip in portal where the thing laughed at your friend but ive never played that game so i might just like it because ive never seen a game laugh at you for dying. you need more unique clips for a failtage. As for your other videos, I didn't watch them, but i do know that its hard to get views on a series if you dont have a HUGE fanbase, unless thats what you started doing in the first place in which case it will be hard to even grow your fan base unless you are one of the first to do something like sydicates the minecraft project which is hard to do now because of how big gaming is on youtube.

If you are purely going for views then i say you need to be the first to make a video about something. I was the FIRST (i think) to upload a tutorial in this and it has a lot of views although I'm not a VIEWWHORE like many people are and a I acctually put *PATCHED* in the title when it was patched and my views slowed down from then on. [ Register or Signin to view external links. ]

sorry if i rambled lol im not going to proofread this

edit: if you have trouble trying to find original content to make YOUTUBE IS NOT WHERE YOU FIND ORIGINAL IDEAS FOR YOUTUBE that would make no sense
also you can see in my recent series that it is hard to get views on them because they are either not original or on/about something popular
i think your approach is good, just keep improving and try for originality