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#41. Posted:
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DMstratz wrote pretty good actually. nice edit


Thanks that's what I like to see. I appreciate the comment.
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I'll rate different things out of 10 rather than just the whole piece so you can see where to improve.

Length: 2
Filter: 6
Music fit: 6
Camera Angles: 7
Actual effects: 0
Quality: 8

You have a nice camera by the looks of it, and the filter overlay was alright, but not perfect. I personally think it fitted well with the song, obviously more darker and slower songs need a darker filter, more towards the blue scale rather than yellow. The song I don't mind personally too much, but the genre of music is way too overplayed in video edits. It was okay for this OCE, but the longer edits you do, the more about the music it becomes. I actually find my music before editing, it allows me to fit the clips around the music. Whilst filming I have the songs in my head so I know where each point will come into my final composition. You didn't use any effects at all, and actually a flash effect with the screen pumping to the bass would have been nice, but it wasn't needed. That's why I gave it a 0 because there were no effects. Good cameraman getting some nice angles around there, and a nice camera to record. But let us see that skateboard a bit more! You've got a perfect shot to show it off, I don't wanna see the filter intefering with it.

I'm only a media student, but I've been doing this stuff for years on my course and off it.
#43. Posted:
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Stonerzard wrote I'll rate different things out of 10 rather than just the whole piece so you can see where to improve.

Length: 2
Filter: 6
Music fit: 6
Camera Angles: 7
Actual effects: 0
Quality: 8

You have a nice camera by the looks of it, and the filter overlay was alright, but not perfect. I personally think it fitted well with the song, obviously more darker and slower songs need a darker filter, more towards the blue scale rather than yellow. The song I don't mind personally too much, but the genre of music is way too overplayed in video edits. It was okay for this OCE, but the longer edits you do, the more about the music it becomes. I actually find my music before editing, it allows me to fit the clips around the music. Whilst filming I have the songs in my head so I know where each point will come into my final composition. You didn't use any effects at all, and actually a flash effect with the screen pumping to the bass would have been nice, but it wasn't needed. That's why I gave it a 0 because there were no effects. Good cameraman getting some nice angles around there, and a nice camera to record. But let us see that skateboard a bit more! You've got a perfect shot to show it off, I don't wanna see the filter intefering with it.

I'm only a media student, but I've been doing this stuff for years on my course and off it.



Alright thanks for tips. I appreciate the comment, I'll put it to good use.
#44. Posted:
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I thought the video was really nice, except it was really short make them longer next time.

7/10
#45. Posted:
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Potion wrote I thought the video was really nice, except it was really short make them longer next time.

7/10


It was kinda a skateboard "OCE" you could say lol. Thanks tho. I appreciate the comment.
#46. Posted:
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Nice edit, true quality and slick editing along with the song, I also watched your Call Of Duty quick edits, they're not bad either. I'm hitting some clips on PS4 right now for CoD:AW , May send you a message at some point if you want some editing experience?

Overall a nice clip.
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Pretty sick, you have synced it quite well and have rendered it at a very good bit rate!

source: I too am an editor
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I like it, but I like the video more clear without the filters and all that stuff
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Short but clean dude pretty nice !
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its a cool little edit good work.
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