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Hey guys, so earlier someone asked me for a clan logo. So i made them a simple C with the pen tool in photoshop, made it 3d in cinema 4d and added some text in a place i thought would be nicely placed.
The clan name is "Crime"
So i thought i would try to make something behing the logo that kinda represented it, so i got a random imagine from google, and i pentooled each of the guys out of it seperatly, then just the buildings. I then placed it behind the logo.
I'll give some people rep whoever give me an honest rate with some logical thinking of what i should do to make this better. thanks
Imagine
Edit* Oops forgot to add the actual image xDD
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The clan name is "Crime"
So i thought i would try to make something behing the logo that kinda represented it, so i got a random imagine from google, and i pentooled each of the guys out of it seperatly, then just the buildings. I then placed it behind the logo.
I'll give some people rep whoever give me an honest rate with some logical thinking of what i should do to make this better. thanks
Imagine
Edit* Oops forgot to add the actual image xDD
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May I see the photo please?
EDIT: I like where this is going. I like the mobster feeling. I don't see what the D is supposed to be behind the C. It's confusing. I think the C should maybe be changed a bit? Maybe made smaller? I like the mobsters and the city background but it needs more. Maybe the mobsters on a street? Also, definitely should be some light like there is a street light and the mobsters should made a different color to contrast with the Background and Name. Other than that, it's pretty cool. Nice Job so far, seems like this is coming along well.
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EDIT: I like where this is going. I like the mobster feeling. I don't see what the D is supposed to be behind the C. It's confusing. I think the C should maybe be changed a bit? Maybe made smaller? I like the mobsters and the city background but it needs more. Maybe the mobsters on a street? Also, definitely should be some light like there is a street light and the mobsters should made a different color to contrast with the Background and Name. Other than that, it's pretty cool. Nice Job so far, seems like this is coming along well.
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From what you say visualizing it I think it is gonna look good. Now without actually seeing it that can be hard to give. A honest opinion. But it sounds like from what you have it will turn out good the buildings are a good idea I think give it that sketchy city feel to it. It is something I'd like to see when finished for sure. Just make sure the colors match when. I think of crime I think of dark colors if that helps at all. (I am on a phone so if it is posted then for some reason I can not see it).
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imagine- wrote Hey guys, so earlier someone asked me for a clan logo. So i made them a simple C with the pen tool in photoshop, made it 3d in cinema 4d and added some text in a place i thought would be nicely placed.
The clan name is "Crime"
So i thought i would try to make something behing the logo that kinda represented it, so i got a random imagine from google, and i pentooled each of the guys out of it seperatly, then just the buildings. I then placed it behind the logo.
I'll give some people rep whoever give me an honest rate with some logical thinking of what i should do to make this better. thanks
Imagine
Edit* Oops forgot to add the actual image xDD
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Okay after seeing the photo first off the city and people should not be the same color it just doesn't look right. What I would do instead is move the buildings inside the C if anything that way you can see your people still make it blenned also it looks like it's just stacked on top of each other. Im not sure if that is a D behind the C but again it is hard to tell I. Can tell you are someone new at this and don't take any of this the wrong way it is not hate my friend when I started I to had to take negitive feedback to improve. I'm sorry if I sound harsh not trying to just trying to help you.
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Grown wroteimagine- wrote Hey guys, so earlier someone asked me for a clan logo. So i made them a simple C with the pen tool in photoshop, made it 3d in cinema 4d and added some text in a place i thought would be nicely placed.
The clan name is "Crime"
So i thought i would try to make something behing the logo that kinda represented it, so i got a random imagine from google, and i pentooled each of the guys out of it seperatly, then just the buildings. I then placed it behind the logo.
I'll give some people rep whoever give me an honest rate with some logical thinking of what i should do to make this better. thanks
Imagine
Edit* Oops forgot to add the actual image xDD
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Okay after seeing the photo first off the city and people should not be the same color it just doesn't look right. What I would do instead is move the buildings instead the C if anything that way you can see your people still make it blenned also it looks like it's just stacked on top of each other. I'm sorry if I sound harsh not trying to just trying to help you.
Thanks for your feedback man, this helps alot, because i wasn't exactly sure what to do after this point.
When you do sound harsh btw, you help people more by being honest, instead of rating everything a 10/10.
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the 3d text crime doesnt match the background at all. The "D" image thing in the background is pretty random try and remove it. The guys that you cut out are really edgy try and re cut them and make the edges more smooth. The building in the background is okay but still doesnt match the 3d text you presented. The 3 peoples legs should be cut to match the city in the background. I suggest you get rid of the 3d text and make the background blend more. Also try a different color scheme.
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It looks nice but i think the people in the back a little to dark. It hard to see the detail of the outline of the bodies.
Lighten that up a bit and you are good to go
Lighten that up a bit and you are good to go
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Hey I'm glad I can help it really is not that bad I'm guessing it is one of your first times attempting a logo which in my opinion is not the easiest thing to do out of the rest. Just remember especially with clans they are gonna be looking for a logo that will catch people's attention .
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Honestly it just doesnt flow, the focus is off from the name. The buildings and guys blur to much together. You need more colors and to re size and blur the background
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imagine- wrote Hey guys, so earlier someone asked me for a clan logo. So i made them a simple C with the pen tool in photoshop, made it 3d in cinema 4d and added some text in a place i thought would be nicely placed.
The clan name is "Crime"
So i thought i would try to make something behing the logo that kinda represented it, so i got a random imagine from google, and i pentooled each of the guys out of it seperatly, then just the buildings. I then placed it behind the logo.
I'll give some people rep whoever give me an honest rate with some logical thinking of what i should do to make this better. thanks
Imagine
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I honestly see no reason to make the c with the pen tool, its looks a font.
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