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-Gizmo
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I really don't know what else to change or add on. This is my first time with 3D and 2nd GFX. Criticism and ratings are much appreciated!


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Thats really cool i really like it, 8.9/10
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The sun is too bright and overpowers the piece,

Try toning that down a bit

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-Gizmo wrote I really don't know what else to change or add on. This is my first time with 3D and 2nd GFX. Criticism and ratings are much appreciated!


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Yea man, I like it. As someone said above, the sun is a little bright. I like how you have made the text look like it is floating on the water, sick man!

9/10 from Josh
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Looks alright, i dont like the outer glow that you have on the text on the right side. As stated above already the sun is too bright and really overpowers the "Gizmo" text. Also, try a different font for the "Gizmo" text i feel like the one you have just doesnt really fit in well.
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d0x wrote Looks alright, i dont like the outer glow that you have on the text on the right side. As stated above already the sun is too bright and really overpowers the "Gizmo" text. Also, try a different font for the "Gizmo" text i feel like the one you have just doesnt really fit in well.


I changed the text styles and removed the flare from the sun. The "GIZMO" is going to take a bit because I need to look for a good font, place it in the right position and re-render it. Thank you guys so much for the feedback!
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I like it but the text to the right isn't the best choice. Especially with the glow.
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The Freedom advertising looks a little off place
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For this being your second piece ever, this is pretty good! Keep up the good work and you should move along nicely!

My Feedback: Your Text on the left, try aligning them more and also equalizing the same between each of them.

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I really like the text but I am not a fan of the text.It still looks nice though.
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