No not at all, hate the intro+end.
Its only a boring clip with some lame music...

fctrutger wrote No not at all, hate the intro+end.
Its only a boring clip with some lame music...

Now that being honest & rude is out of the way..

I recommend you to not be afraid to throw in your voice, say something short & funny.. (really easy with a free program)
The intro; in trying to look badass.. looks really lame, try something simple & clean looking till you get enough experience to throw something nice together, & last but not least.. name the video something to do with FIFA. If you want to do short video's. Maybe make a series out of it, "FIFA 15: Clip of the week" spend all week trying to get clips.. & eventually you will have stacked clips. At the end of the video, make small text & a thumbnail to take you to the last clip of the week.

Coyotic wrote

fctrutger wrote No not at all, hate the intro+end.
Its only a boring clip with some lame music...

Now that being honest & rude is out of the way..

I recommend you to not be afraid to throw in your voice, say something short & funny.. (really easy with a free program)
The intro; in trying to look badass.. looks really lame, try something simple & clean looking till you get enough experience to throw something nice together, & last but not least.. name the video something to do with FIFA. If you want to do short video's. Maybe make a series out of it, "FIFA 15: Clip of the week" spend all week trying to get clips.. & eventually you will have stacked clips. At the end of the video, make small text & a thumbnail to take you to the last clip of the week.

thanks that's just what I needed some friendly criticism and advice, rather than complete hate I can only get better with practice.

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fctrutger wrote that's just what I needed some friendly criticism and advice, rather than complete hate I can only get better with practice.

You're welcome. I no longer have time for video making (job, girlfriend, puppy, TTG) but I was once in your shoes, new to it & before anyone wanted to tell me on what I could do better, they would inform me on what I did wrong.. Which isn't always bad. Always take criticism & constructive criticism & you will grow as a person/editor.