Bro im afraid to say you need to learn some new techniques,

use more than just photoshop
dont get 90% of it from google
use a custom typeface with custom settings on the type using the character window

this is one i did a few years ago in my early days i am much better now

Hey man! I appriciate the advice, I was experimenting with a new style. Have a look at my port, its got more of my work on there.

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WarsonDesigns wrote Hey man! I appriciate the advice, I was experimenting with a new style. Have a look at my port, its got more of my work on there.

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looking down your site some of you other stuff is actually pretty good

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^^ Stuff like that is good, nice colours not over a over edit

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^^ Stuff like this isnt so great the colours just dont really work blue is far too strong for the army tan on the character

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For this how did you make all the black swirls behind the character?

One last thing you should think about making yourself a emblem, just like mine saying "Warson" experiment with in on different lines all that kind of stuff don't go crazy with colors often the simplest designs are the best ones

I've had a look at your other work, and that is brilliant.

but your new design.. i'm not too sure on completely, and i'm sorry if that offends you in any way. I personally just don't like the look of it, but hey, that's just my opinion

Just keep working on things and you'll just get better, i'm trying the same just now, and i admit i still suck.
Dean

Thanks guys! Means alot Dean! And it doesnt! Its just expreimenting! and ParadoXx it was a smoke render, I then "screen" and faded the edges, turned the opacity down and yeah

I really like your work and the way you follow a theme for the most part of your work. Good job

If you need any help hit me up on Skype.
I can help you with anything, I have been designing since I was 12, and now I am in school for it.
Add me on Skype.
aoberc69 if you have time/ want to learn.
Anyone can add me, just saying I will help you out with simple shit. <3