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Hyundai Genesis coupe Illustration! [BEST YET?]
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Fyredesigns
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Here's the process of my latest and probably my best illustration so far! This is a Hyundai Genesis Coupe. This project took about 12.5 hours! I am very happy with the outcome and would love some feedback!
*also in relation to the interior, u tried to make it sort of like a silhouette so sorry for the lack of detail in that, maybe I'll fix it later *

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The line work looks like it needs a little attention, some irregularities here and there.
Also the wheels look a little rushed also (in terms of the colouring)


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This looks pretty clean, the only couple problems I see are the small bump on the top, that shadow looks a little off and the back tire closest to us has a small drop off line that looks a little sketchy, some minor readjustments and some line practice and those problems will go away, Other than that, clean piece. Good job bud (:

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This looks pretty clean, the only couple problems I see are the small bump on the top, that shadow looks a little off and the back tire closest to us has a small drop off line that looks a little sketchy, some minor readjustments and some line practice and those problems will go away, Other than that, clean piece. Good job bud (:

the little bump is the antenna they are really small on the car and the lighting on the wheels is real hard cuz its sort of metallic i been working on reflective light and specular light i believe i did decent on my light direction.
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x99 wrote
This looks pretty clean, the only couple problems I see are the small bump on the top, that shadow looks a little off and the back tire closest to us has a small drop off line that looks a little sketchy, some minor readjustments and some line practice and those problems will go away, Other than that, clean piece. Good job bud (:

the little bump is the antenna they are really small on the car and the lighting on the wheels is real hard cuz its sort of metallic i been working on reflective light and specular light i believe i did decent on my light direction.


The wheel shadowing is decent, it is the shadow of the car that bugs me, for instance it curves under the bottom of the car and is too short and rounded off in the front. And if that bump is the antenna than I would make it a more noticeable difference, other than that the light direction is good and this is a good piece
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x99 wrote
oOFIRESPINNEROo wrote
x99 wrote
This looks pretty clean, the only couple problems I see are the small bump on the top, that shadow looks a little off and the back tire closest to us has a small drop off line that looks a little sketchy, some minor readjustments and some line practice and those problems will go away, Other than that, clean piece. Good job bud (:

the little bump is the antenna they are really small on the car and the lighting on the wheels is real hard cuz its sort of metallic i been working on reflective light and specular light i believe i did decent on my light direction.


The wheel shadowing is decent, it is the shadow of the car that bugs me, for instance it curves under the bottom of the car and is too short and rounded off in the front. And if that bump is the antenna than I would make it a more noticeable difference, other than that the light direction is good and this is a good piece


I agree on this, The wheel shadow is very nicely done, just the actual body shadow looks out of shape a bit more harshness added to the shadow on the sides and it'll look better!
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TwinAtlantic wrote
x99 wrote
oOFIRESPINNEROo wrote
x99 wrote
This looks pretty clean, the only couple problems I see are the small bump on the top, that shadow looks a little off and the back tire closest to us has a small drop off line that looks a little sketchy, some minor readjustments and some line practice and those problems will go away, Other than that, clean piece. Good job bud (:

the little bump is the antenna they are really small on the car and the lighting on the wheels is real hard cuz its sort of metallic i been working on reflective light and specular light i believe i did decent on my light direction.


The wheel shadowing is decent, it is the shadow of the car that bugs me, for instance it curves under the bottom of the car and is too short and rounded off in the front. And if that bump is the antenna than I would make it a more noticeable difference, other than that the light direction is good and this is a good piece


I agree on this, The wheel shadow is very nicely done, just the actual body shadow looks out of shape a bit more harshness added to the shadow on the sides and it'll look better!
I guess but the lighting is to the back left of the cat so it can't be too crazy ya know.
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just retouched the image
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That looks awesome! I can't really say anything bad about it because I know I couldn't do anything remotely close to that. Nice work!
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Corso wrote That looks awesome! I can't really say anything bad about it because I know I couldn't do anything remotely close to that. Nice work!

Thanks bro! there is always room for improvement i will have to keep in mind for my future projects
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