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These are 2 banners that I've made over the weekend. Feedback is appreciated
Here are the links so you can zoom in if you can't see them that well.
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Personally I know nothing about gfx. But I really like the 2nd one. Just seems to flow and is really clean.
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Gob wrote Personally I know nothing about gfx. But I really like the 2nd one. Just seems to flow and is really clean.

Thanks for the feedback!
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The "Warhawk" banner is done well for a sleek clean design.
My eyes keep wandering toward the circle around the logo (possible remove it completely)
For your subtext try to use a more legible font.
All in all great job!
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iStussy wrote
The "Warhawk" banner is done well for a sleek clean design.
My eyes keep wandering toward the circle around the logo (possible remove it completely)
For your subtext try to use a more legible font.
All in all great job!

The warhawk image was cut off so that was in my opinion, the best way to get around that. As for the text, its a bit more legible when its on the youtube channel. But now that I look back at it, I see where you're coming from.

Thanks for the feedback!
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The first one has potential but unfortunately the amount of whitespace (literally in this case) throws the image off.
The crimson color you have is nice here and with a bit more of it artistically thrown in this could be sweet.
If you do that you may want to layer CC the render of the warhawk.

As always, PM me if you want/need help.
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There both pretty good. I would rate them a 8/10. :dealwithit:
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Really like them both. 2nd one would be great as a give-away for what ever!
Great work - Keep it up.
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Zef wrote
The first one has potential but unfortunately the amount of whitespace (literally in this case) throws the image off.
The crimson color you have is nice here and with a bit more of it artistically thrown in this could be sweet.
If you do that you may want to layer CC the render of the warhawk.

As always, PM me if you want/need help.


Yeah, now that I look back at it I see what you mean. The guy I made this for likes how it is but I'll mess around with it for practice. Also, good to know I can message you for help

Wae wrote There both pretty good. I would rate them a 8/10. :dealwithit:


Thanks for the positive feedback

Pegi wrote Really like them both. 2nd one would be great as a give-away for what ever!
Great work - Keep it up.


Thanks for the feedback! I actually released it on another site. Here is the download
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