Pretty fair design and decent camera work but it should be about half that in overall length. I would cut a few scenes here.

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cool sound effects i don't have much to say about this. well done ^.^

Perverse wrote cool sound effects i don't have much to say about this. well done ^.^

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Zef wrote Pretty fair design and decent camera work but it should be about half that in overall length. I would cut a few scenes here.

I feel 5 seconds is too short for intros, maybe its just my style, but I just feel like I can't get much shown in just 5 seconds other than a logo reveal

I don't know if anyone is getting this, but I feel the transition from each pan-in to the next is quite abrupt,and almost feels as if you are starting one clip to the next. Perhaps a camera swivel to link each different angle would work? If thats not possible then don't worry, I'm a graphics nub, this is just opinion based on what I'm seeing, I don't really know the true potential of what can be done in these programs

EDIT: After watching a couple more times, the swivel thing i said was stupid, feels like all you need is to delay the transition for maybe like .5 of a second more on each, maybe fade to black then fade in again in that time.

Fletcher wrote I don't know if anyone is getting this, but I feel the transition from each pan-in to the next is quite abrupt,and almost feels as if you are starting one clip to the next. Perhaps a camera swivel to link each different angle would work? If thats not possible then don't worry, I'm a graphics nub, this is just opinion based on what I'm seeing, I don't really know the true potential of what can be done in these programs

EDIT: After watching a couple more times, the swivel thing i said was stupid, feels like all you need is to delay the transition for maybe like .5 of a second more on each, maybe fade to black then fade in again in that time.

They're supposed to look cut, they're different cameras

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Fletcher wrote I don't know if anyone is getting this, but I feel the transition from each pan-in to the next is quite abrupt,and almost feels as if you are starting one clip to the next. Perhaps a camera swivel to link each different angle would work? If thats not possible then don't worry, I'm a graphics nub, this is just opinion based on what I'm seeing, I don't really know the true potential of what can be done in these programs

EDIT: After watching a couple more times, the swivel thing i said was stupid, feels like all you need is to delay the transition for maybe like .5 of a second more on each, maybe fade to black then fade in again in that time.

They're supposed to look cut, they're different cameras

What I assume he means by that is how there is one scene going on with 2 angles but the scene is then played again with a different 2 angles. It is a bit abrupt, I would suggest the one scene with only 3 angles, thus giving you a 7-8 second into which would solve the extra length problem and the repeating of scenes problem.