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What do you think? (Illustration)
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Nanzinga
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Just starting to get into illustration, what do you guys think of this so far?
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Your line work needs improving and the arms just look weird in my opinion, however it's a nice piece of work. 7/10
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Nice trace.

Now just improve your line variation.
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Exactly as critical said, your line tracing is amazing and the concept is great, but you need to work on the variation of it.
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Looks great to me, but I'm surely no expert on illustrations.
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Fingers are floating. [ Register or Signin to view external links. ]

And the right hand looks like a foot, i'd improve them.

Try add some depth to it too, looks too flat.
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