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After 15 hours I've finally finished my A-Level photography exam. Although they didn't quite turn out how I initially imagined I'm still really proud of them as I put a lot of effort and tried things I have never done before.
The work has taken inspiration off of the artists, Alberto Seveso and Chris Slabber. It was a very long process setting these images up and editing them. I think the thing I'm most proud of is drawing the body of the model as she was originally wearing a sweatshirt in the original photographs and I had no knowledge of the human anatomy or how to digitally paint, the only thing that helped me was my knowledge of lighting.
Here are the images I made, please leave some feedback as these took me a very long time and I would like to hear your thoughts on them.
The work has taken inspiration off of the artists, Alberto Seveso and Chris Slabber. It was a very long process setting these images up and editing them. I think the thing I'm most proud of is drawing the body of the model as she was originally wearing a sweatshirt in the original photographs and I had no knowledge of the human anatomy or how to digitally paint, the only thing that helped me was my knowledge of lighting.
Here are the images I made, please leave some feedback as these took me a very long time and I would like to hear your thoughts on them.
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They look great mate nice job
the only way i can see to improve in the arms look a little bit worse than the rest of the piece and i feel if you fixed that you have made a real nice piece!
the only way i can see to improve in the arms look a little bit worse than the rest of the piece and i feel if you fixed that you have made a real nice piece!
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Im_Saxby wrote They look great mate nice job
the only way i can see to improve in the arms look a little bit worse than the rest of the piece and i feel if you fixed that you have made a real nice piece!
Thank you for the feedback.
The arms were definitely the thing I struggled on the most because I had no idea how to shape them or where the contours of the arms were such as the armpit. I think I'm going to study anatomy and practice my digital painting. Should really benefit me because I like these kind of images and want to do them more.
Sadly I can't touch these images anymore because I'm out of exam time
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I think the plumes need more variation, they seem so condensed to me.
There's also not much of a transition between the body and the smoke(?).
I think they just change too suddenly.
I don't really like the colors either.
The lighting on the smoke in the first one seems so, idk, sedated.
And the red just looks odd to me in the second one.
There's also not much of a transition between the body and the smoke(?).
I think they just change too suddenly.
I don't really like the colors either.
The lighting on the smoke in the first one seems so, idk, sedated.
And the red just looks odd to me in the second one.
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The first one is really as you've rushed the cutting around the body.
However the second one is really nicely done. Good job.
However the second one is really nicely done. Good job.
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