Its been nearly a year since i last posted a verse on TTG and in that year i think i have become the greatest rapper in the history of the universe so can you give me opinions on this please :

These dark thoughts are building up inside of me,
a modern day, great, serial killer is what i try to be
lie to me, to see what your insides will be
when i decide to rip into your sides with knives and things,
like saws, an axe, in fact this chains already covered in brains
but lacks the power, it needs to move fast, the teeth are lethal
on my buck, but its stuck in the wall so il creep around the hall with illegal thoughts
with a truck load of assault, weapons and thats what im thinkin of
when i see a girl, all that goes through my mind is what i could do to her
if i had here alone and watch her moan i can name almost a million ways to hurt
another human being, being mean just seems to bring a meaning to all this shit thats seemingly
entertaining and its like brain is raining of sick thoughts too many scary movies and thats what the shit brought
i got a lit thought and a can of gasoline and if you dont know what that means
its that all my thoughts are fire
a compulsive liar is what i am a psycho i might go as far and break the cycle
and say im an imposter
a fake jeffrey dahmer who needs to see a doctor
cause this black holes eating me up and i cant hold on any longer