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Opinions? I'm unsure on if I could have done anything differently or? feedback is much appreciated!!


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To be honest i thought i was about to watch a movie.
In my opinion i dont really like, i dont know how to improve this, sorry.
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dcsz wrote To be honest i thought i was about to watch a movie.
In my opinion i dont really like, i dont know how to improve this, sorry.


Ah Fairenough thankyou for the feedback
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Theres alot you can imrve on but for your first go fair play i wont rate it as its your first
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it was beast yea i like it!
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1: Not sure why "entertainment" appears before "gravemind"

2: It doesn't seem like anything is going to happen, if that makes sense. Have something moving so that we pay attention.

3: Don't use different fonts for the words. Stick with the same font.
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