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Check Me Out (Rapper) NEW SONG
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ObeyConflict
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I just made this soundcloud to start fresh. My new song is below please check me out and give feedback.


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and if you missed the last one its right here
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#2. Posted:
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overall the tone is kinda low, the flow was ok I mean im not going to be too hard because youre new and thats cool. I did like the bits where you were going a little faster. The lyrics could use rearranging and you said a few words that could have been taken out completely and would have sounded just fine. The beat is also not bad, I like the simple yet elegant sound.

Not bad, its nice to see a softer style beat. Just keep on practicing man!
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thanks bro i needed that criticism :thumbsup: :thumbsup:
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Good job bro, couple times you were off beat but then you brought it back together, i didnt have problems with overall tone, so overall great job I'll keep a lookout.
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Listen to my song called Its the A Milli Remix
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Come on everyone listen to me and tell me what i could work on, I'll have more out very soon, just tell me what i could work on.
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Go listent to my new song Predicting Greatness II and tell me what you think.
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I honestly don't like the sound of your voice, but that's just my opinion.
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LYON wrote I honestly don't like the sound of your voice, but that's just my opinion.
I understand bro, everybody isnt gonna like my voice, I appreciate you giving me a try.
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Listen to my new song, its up in the first section and if you missed any old songs its up there too.
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