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How is it going guys?
This is my first photo manipulation, actually first piece of work, that I have done in over a year. So i would greatly appreciate any type of feedback that you all are willing to share with me.


The concept was to show how two minds, or two different types people, see the world in how dark and evil it can be to how bright and a live it is.
Original image
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Each version is only slightly different. All i did was just remove some things.
V1
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V2
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V3
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Thank you for taking time out of your day to take a look at my work
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Its kind of odd to have the evil side have that effect to it sorta, the red bits when the bright side has none. Like its not bad, its just off putting when looking directly in the middle. It looks odd, I like the V3 the most because it has a nice balance of colors. but it is a bit too dark


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the left is too dark,
It is very hard to see.


Go easy when using adjustments.
a.k.a (color corrections)
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Thanks for the feedback @Qwel & @Critical.
I'm sure making the image brighter can be a quick and easy fix.


I'm gonna use this project as something to help my mind begin to flow with ideas, so if there is anything else I should work/focus on go ahead and point it out! Everything helps!
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